Great work
I think you did real great with this short. The music, background design and the animation was effective in bringing out the tension of the moment. I really felt it.
Great work
I think you did real great with this short. The music, background design and the animation was effective in bringing out the tension of the moment. I really felt it.
yess finally... someone who understands.
Fair effort
Besides the annoying sound it had a story; that was the nice thing about it.
Language barrier
It took me a while to understand what was going on. I am clueless to what the text was.
The backgrounds were refreshing however and I liked the way you demonstrated the threat of the rats. Try practising more on your perspective drawing.
The music was beautiful. Continue sharpening your skills for better results. Good attempt.
Not all the artist were up for it
Some of the artists just added a picture for the sake of putting in a picture. I think it would have been more effective if each character was portraying a different feeling about falling in the ocean. Maybe when the project was being announced this could have been stated. However, some were really quite nice. Not to be silly but the next one could have the characters driving on the road or going to space in odd vehicles and saying different things, or showing different emotions.(just food for thought)
Interesting story
This film has an interesting story and the music sure brought that out. However, though the background design and colours as well as character colours were great, this film could have been better if a bit more work was done on the animation, just to add some life to the set. The shot angles and character positions were ok. A fair effort but more can be done.
This is wonderful
This was a great Story we dont see many of them for one reason or the other. This was really great work, from action to sound effects, you name it, it was great. Keep doing what you do. Bless.
Great Flash
The shot angles were incredible. The sound effects were good. The animation had a nice smooth feel to it you really do this stuff well, keep it up.
True story, you having a good day and Baam!
The backgrounds aren't too bad. Colur choice was great also. The animation needs a lot of sharpening up. You have a nice story about a horrible fact of life these days. Keep working you might want to put in some joints next time lol.
Unique style
This was a nice little story, very interesting with a nice twist at the end. You should probably have more exams -D. Keep working on your skills you can only get better.
Good going mi boss
Wallpaperman you going on good, nice song, the story combined well with the song, the timing was also good. Mi si di pig(babylon) waan dis rasta lol. Nuff respect, keep going.